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The star's maker by ToryoNoDoroppu The star's maker by ToryoNoDoroppu
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:iconxredmemory:
Hello,I'm here to give you a very short critique!
Hope it will help you ;)

Good things - I love the way you colored the background and her skin,The scenario is really good,In general this deviation is awesome.

Bad things - The lines are a little sketchy

- for Sai,using the curve tool on the other layer option (the one with the little pen in it) is the best to make line-art.

You know,the lines remind me about how in anime's if something was going to move in the background,they would of make it look different (Sorry if this offends you ^^;)

because the character looks a little unrelated to the background because the line art,

And to be honest with the curve tool it will probably make it worse xD
well i have no idea,but you should try!

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:bulletyellow: Also,i don't know if this is intended or not,but her eyes are really different,
But that probably is intended isn't it?;)

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That's it!
Hope its okay! :iconilikeitplz:
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:iconyukithings:
Yukithings Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
wow
so pretty
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :hug:!
Sorry for the late reply ^^"
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:iconsparklemehappy:
SparkleMeHappy Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
I really like this piece. The stars, the texture, the girl..by the way, what is that laying by her feet?
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thank you ^^ that thing is uh...the thing to make the soap bubbles,sorry now I don't remember the exact word XD
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:iconsparklemehappy:
SparkleMeHappy Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
Ohh, you mean a bubble blower thingamabob? Ahaha I can't even think of the exact name either. So she blows bubbles in the clouds among the stars? These 3 things sound like such a wonderful combo. :love:
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes!I mean it XD.She make the stars like bubbles :3
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:iconsparklemehappy:
SparkleMeHappy Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
OHHH, that's even cooler! So it makes star-shaped bubbles??
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Exactly :D!
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:iconsparklemehappy:
SparkleMeHappy Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
That's awesome! I wish it was possible to actually create star-shaped bubbles, but I think that only exists in SpongeBob lol! I don't know if you know that cartoon show. It's from the U.S.
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL I never connected this concept to Spongebob,it's fantastic XD!
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ailurophite Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist
amazing :)
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thak you :hug:
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:iconaveneline:
Aveneline Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ermahgerd! :D
I LOVE this <33
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:iconangellale87:
AngelLale87 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*w* ho visto il video! Pellissimo!
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
grazie *A* :hug:!
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:iconangellale87:
AngelLale87 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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:iconphantasyak:
Phantasyak Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i wish one i can write a Critique one day , but i don't speak very well english, so i really like this work
and the detail of the cloud is great !
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know how you feel :D
however thank you very much
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:icontbg-95:
TBG-95 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome 8D
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :D
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:icontbg-95:
TBG-95 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course ;D
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you^^
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Rebecca-47 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is so pretty! I really like the concept and the wonderful colourin scheme. Is that a giant bubble wand next to her? :o This is just too cute. The stars in the foreground glow nicely, and the girl looks so cute and happy. The clothing is drawn well, and I like the watercolour style. :) The lighting is great too.
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much :hug:
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:iconoomyuoo:
oOMyuOo Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Che bella! **
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
grazie mille :hug:
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:iconoomyuoo:
oOMyuOo Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
figurati! :3
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:iconazzurrocielo45:
azzurrocielo45 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
che bello ^^
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
grazie^^
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:iconazzurrocielo45:
azzurrocielo45 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
di nulla! ^^
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:iconkampfzwerglevi:
KampfzwergLevi Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really nice work~
I like the idea, coloration, etc.. all in all: great ~
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:icontoryonodoroppu:
ToryoNoDoroppu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you^^
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